:: Luna & Saturn::
Fantasy worlds engulf me
As music lulls me soothingly
I drift away lazily
Wrapped in Luna’s midnight wings
Water drop peals adorn my hair
A pale green gown is what I wear
I slowly dance up Saturn’s stair
I look for my fated star
We meet this night on Saturn’s rings
We talk of love and mysterious things
We muse over mortals fragile dreams
While Luna nods her approval
Saturn’s rings envelop us
Luna sings a song
We drift away lazily
Sleeping sweetly in Saturn’s arms.
BJH 06-25-2011
Dreamscape Poetry 
Loved it as always. The interplay between the imagery and the narrative works well, as does the overall picture you paint. Your whimsical nature shines through in your poetry, even when things seem dark. I appreciate that. Keep up the kick ass poetry, always a joy to read.
crb.
thank you drew. I appreciate your comments as I always say you are not one to waste words
what beautiful images are painted here in your poem.
thank you so very much poetry is like mind pictures to me
Fantasy worlds engulf me
As music lulls me soothingly
I drift away lazily
Wrapped in Luna’s midnight wings
mind blowing lines, well done.
Happy Potluck.
Thanx Hun…. I guess i am a creature of the moon , stars, and whimsey. 🙂
I love this. Very clever and moving poetry. I particularly like these lines:
“We talk of love and mysterious things
We muse over mortals fragile dreams”
Thanks for sharing 🙂
Clever.. nice compliment, I have never been said to be clever. 🙂 … yes those are my favorite ones too
magical…to be in the heavens just to sit in the vastness of it with the one you love…very nice…
it truly is.
thank you