Fated Star Revealed

:: Luna & Saturn::

Fantasy worlds engulf me
As music lulls me soothingly
I drift away lazily
Wrapped in Luna’s midnight wings

Water drop peals adorn my hair
A pale green gown is what I wear
I slowly dance up Saturn’s stair
I look for my fated star

We meet this night on Saturn’s rings
We talk of love and mysterious things
We muse over mortals fragile dreams
While Luna nods her approval

Saturn’s rings envelop us
Luna sings a song
We drift away lazily
Sleeping sweetly in Saturn’s arms.

BJH 06-25-2011

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10 responses to “Fated Star Revealed

  1. Loved it as always. The interplay between the imagery and the narrative works well, as does the overall picture you paint. Your whimsical nature shines through in your poetry, even when things seem dark. I appreciate that. Keep up the kick ass poetry, always a joy to read.

    crb.

  2. Fantasy worlds engulf me
    As music lulls me soothingly
    I drift away lazily
    Wrapped in Luna’s midnight wings

    mind blowing lines, well done.

    Happy Potluck.

  3. I love this. Very clever and moving poetry. I particularly like these lines:
    “We talk of love and mysterious things
    We muse over mortals fragile dreams”

    Thanks for sharing 🙂

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